Goldielocks and the three lions

This is a rewritten piece of Goldie locks and the three bears.

This is a drat piece so it may contain some errors.

Long long ago,their was a girl and her name was Goldilocks referring to her long golden locks of hair. One day she decided to go for a walk deep into the forest,she had got in pretty far into the forest when she came upon a house. Which she thought was strange to have a house in the middle of nowhere. So she decided to make a song about  the house in the middle of nowhere so she went and sat under a nice and shady tree.  This is how the song  went  as it is still none to this very day  “once there was a house in the middle of nowhere,which I found on a sunny day it look nice and cosy and  warm and pretty,once there was a house in the middle of nowhere in the middle of  nowhere and that's where it stands this very old day’ when she had finished making her song she decided to see if anybody was home so she knocked on the door rat a tat rat came the old wooden door there was no answer so Goldilocks decided to venture on in. When she walked in she saw the kitchen on the kitchen table was some meat then Goldilocks thought to herself I’m hungry this meat looks like a pretty good snack so she decided to try the first piece of meat “ho ho hot too hot” she exclaimed so she tried the next one “bree bree”,freezing said as she shrived. So on to the next on she said to herself “ah perfected”,she said excitedly so she decided to eat it all up after that she was feeling tired so she found the living room and sat on the first chair “this chair is too big and too hard ”she said so she hopped down out of that chair and climbed onto the next “this chair is to big to and is way to soft,” she said loudly so she climb off that one on sat on the next “ah this is perfect,”she said excitedly then crash the chair broke “oops,”said Goldilocks she was feeling sleepy by then so she decided to go up stairs  to the beds she lay on the first bed to hot to hard,”said Goldilocks uncomfortably so she tried the next bed “to cold to soft,”said Goldilocks very awkwardly so she try the next one “perfect,”she said bouncing on the bed so she climbed in and crashed she had gone straight to sleep that's how tired she was as Goldilocks was sleeping the three lions had returned to their house “Someone's been eating my meat,”said Dada lion with a roar “someone's been eating my meat,”said mama lion with a growl “Someone's been eating my meat and therefore gobbled it all up,” said baby cub with a very quiet growl Someone's been sitting in my chair,”said Dada bear very loudly meaning he was angry “Someone's been sitting in my chair,”said mama bear trying to calm herself Someone's been sitting in my chair and there broken it,”said baby cub in tears “Someone's been in my bed,”said Dada bear in anger with even more anger “Someone's been in my bed,” said mama now not very calmly Someone's been in my bed and they're still here,”shouted baby cub in a worried look At that very moment Goldilocks a wake to a yell for help at the same time she flew down the stairs and out the door in one big rush not dearing to look back until she back safe and sound her little old vintage looking village  then after that day she never went back into the depths of the forest so she would never be tempted to go back into the house always keep your eyes peeled for loins because their still looking for Goldilocks but as she is not alive they are looking for nobody but they don’t know that so if you have golden blonde hair with big curly locks  watch as they are looking for you