Future Writing

Over the past two weeks we have been working on narratives about the future. We had to pick and ethical issue that we previously learned about.The issue had to be relevant in the world, we had to write about the problem and make believe a way to fix it. My problem was about global warming and how the world is slowly getting distorted for future generations. As you may have seen last week I posted the plan for this piece 
Here is the final draft product - Writing   
(Please mind that this is a draft and will not be perfect)
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Winter Sport

This week my blog will be about Winter Sport! Since week 3 last term until last week everyone from years 5-8 has participated in winter sport.We could pick from four sports they were,Hockey, Rugby,Netball and Football.I decided to sign up for hockey as that is what I have been playing the last few years of winter sport.There were two hockey teams I got into the A team along with 8 other people.The people in my team were, Me, Petra, Mereana, Grace, Isabella,Gaby, Alexis, Oliver and Ben.We got 3rd overall in the tournament and was a good season with only 2 loses and 1 Draw.
What sport did you play this year and why?    

Reading Slides

This week we did not have workshops so I will not have my weekly reading create blog post.Instead we got to catch up with other work with a few others tasks like -
- Cantamath project
-  Narrative Writing
and novel slide witch is what this blog is about.As you know we have been reading books my book is Though thick and thin.

This is Y chart about my book -
Do you thick my book is good?

Cyber Smart

Today I am going to give you some tips om blog commenting.I have five points for the video we watch

1. Compliment the writers work
It is a good thing when you comment to give the something good about there work so they can continue to do that .

2.Add something that could help them or make it better
Make sure to give them some constructive help but when your saying this don't be rude about as people put a lot of effort into their blog.

3. Make connections
If you have done something to do with their blog tell them. If your experience was the same or different or how you feel on the topic

4.Answer their question
If they have a question don't leave them hanging they want feed back so reply it will help them.

5.Make sure your comment is readable
Don't just write the comment make sure you can read.Say it out loud to your self dose it make sense

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Writing !!!!!!

This week I am going to share my writing work with you.My goal was to Narrative Writing Planning.We brainstormed what a narrative was and what it needs.When had to fill out a plan for the narrative.Things a narrative need are

Setting
Rising action
Climate
Falling action
resolution

This is my work
Do you like writing?

Reading !!!

This week my reading goal was...
Independently predict, interpret and analyse text, 'reading between the lines' to gain a deeper meaning.We have started reading chapter books, we had to pick from ones the teachers supplied for us.For our task to show our understating we had to right predictions about the first chapter, title and front cover.

What do you think the book is about
This is my work -

• Though Thick and Thin Predictions I think the book will be about two boys going though a hard time together and loses a bike.Because of the title and pictures.
•  How the title relates - The title is “though thick and thin is can also mean hard times and good times 
• How the pictures relate - The picture is of two boys and a bike 
• “ you can’t order the weather I think the author is trying to tell me that you can’t pick how the weather is going to be,I get this from order the weather 
• “Hands shading her eyes”I think the author is trying to tell me that it was very bright out side,I get this form shading your eyes you usually shade your eyes when it is bright 
• “His mouth dropped at the news”I think the author is trying to tell me that he was socked and didn’t know how to feel.I get this form he dropped his mouth. People genuinely drop their mouths on shock.
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  

Reading task

This week my reading goal was to Identify some text events and features, and discuss what they make the reader think about. The task we had to do was fill out a doc my teacher made for me.The book we read was called "After the spill" .All the information about the book is in my (DLO)

This is my task  -

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