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Wednesday 29 April 2020

Wonderful Writing

This week in writing I looked at complex sentences, a complex sentence is a sentence that has one independent clause and one dependant clause.My goal was  use complex sentences that are grammatically correct / proofread for spelling, grammar and punctuation.We had to write a short story witch had four of more complex sentences.
This is the inspiration I used for my story
This is my story, Can you find the complex sentences?

When quarantine finally finished I went outside only to find leaves.A calm breeze sent leaves falling from the trees.I watched the leaves fall but then one landed on my face.I peeled the leaf off my face and started to walk away. As I was walking I stopped and  started to collect the leafs into a pile.I run backwards then forwards and jumped into the pile. Finally I made it out of my ginormous leaf pile and continued my walk.When I arrived at the opening of the forest I looked and saw the outside world.


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