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Thursday 28 November 2019

Reading Create

This week I had to write a poem inferring people on a topic that was a new begging for me.We were not aloud to say what the poem was about so we had to use show not tell.

This is my poem, Can you guess what my poem was about?

As I open the gate,the new year begins 
As I shut the gate,the holidays end.

Kids run in and  rushed away 
Kids walk by with a smile on there face.

With the end of Summer closing in 
Uniforms flow in the wind 

Uniforms flow over the new kids 
As the smell of new books and pens fill the air

I smile as my friends say hi 
But butterflys arrive when I step inside

The Summer ended with a new year to happen 
But what is to happen is not yet known.

As the bell rings it is time for me to go 
With alot of time to grow as I learn and show
 
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